i would not have guessed you could pack so much drama into a situation about toothbrushes. im touched.

great cinematography. the zooms added a great dramatic effect. the music helped quite a bit in that dept. as well. my only criticism was that initially i thought the faucet and the toothbrush were the ones falling in love, but at the end it semed more like the new toothbrush and the old one.

you got my vote ;)

Wow... absolutely awesome.

You did a fantastic job of this.

To critique this I\'ll have to be real fuckin\' picky \'cause its so well done. Well lit, excecuted and you pulled off the emotion triumphantly- can i say that without sounding gay? probably not.

I liked the shot of the brush bruching the teeth from the mouth\'s view, but found it didn\'t fit in the flow of the cuts in that spot- Although its cool, I\'d take it out. I also found a lot of the cuts to be not as smooth as they could have been, but even in saying that, it worked so well who am I to critisize it, cause it still obviously works. I\'ll have to look at it in detail more just to see why its works as it does, you nailed this.

And that\'s being really picky, with all the things one could get ripped for, those are really minor- this was pretty good. You had it with technical, writing, flow, and you nailed the week\'s theme right on. The music and the shots were right on the money.

again, this is the only entry so far, and you\'d probably win even if you weren\'t the only entry- this was good.

Brilliant! I loved it. Great camera shots.

Aww, I will start treating my toothbrush better.

I dont know what was opposite in this film but it made me laugh to myself a lot. I love the geeky guy effect. It deffinatly captured the sadness of throwing away an old tooth brush...especially one with the rubber bristles.

good job dorks

Music and camerawork were GREAT. I honestly felt really sorry for the trashcan toothbrush. :( rock on, man!

For 45 seconds, I had no idea what was going on. Just a bunch of random shots of a sink and a toothbrush. It was shot really well, but I just didn\'t like it.

I really liked this. The music helped to set the mood where there wasn\'t one without. If you turned off the sound, your film wouldn\'t be nearly as interesting.

As tears roll down my eyes..
I\'ve come to realize that nothing should be put through this heatbreak and tragedy.


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beautiful..Im keeping my toothbrush until the bristles are rotting and crumbleing..

and I like how big the sink is

Beautiful shots, and the music is drawing me in.

Heh..maybe I\'m just oversensitive but damn it, I felt sorry for that toothbrush. Very nice. I enjoyed it. Lots of good entries this week.

Why does this seem soo much like Samuri Pirate?? CPP you know you\'re better than this! Way too many camera angles and the over usage of it. It seemed you were just trying expirment a bunch of different shots rather than make a film. I liked the music, but like Samuri Pirate it was a bit drowsy. It seemed that the song went on too long and so you tried to fit all of the footage to go along with the music.

really awesome. My girlfriend almost cried.