The concept was good, but it was way too long. Work on telling a story with as little as possible. Good stuff though.. keep up the good work!

Yawn...

nice logo, like the grey background.


but the movie was weak.

yikes

If you really want to show the degradation of women, try zooming in on something other than their face, such as the breasts or backside.

The scrolling text kind of annoyed me. If you can say something in 10 seconds do it, no need to drag things out for 2 minutes just for the sake of showing more pictures of women.

And in proper Spanish your translation is slightly off.

Try again though.

That is just too long. I think it needed some kind of acting or something, it was just the same thing over and over again and the text moved soooooo slow.

This was good, I liked it. It was a bit drawn out. I can see where you trying to use the whole song in the short.

Gay

You used the Victoria\'s Secret strip music CD didnt you? That tells me a lot about you. I thought you made a funny point but I think I know whats really on your agenda. However, I do like your pose at the end, it think it was telling us all what kind of person you are, Slightly geeky but... really horny.

Don\'t listen to anyone that said it dragged on too long, it still was a >short film!

the text scrolled too slow. despite the the opening credits, i still didnt think it really fit the fight.

Not so crazy about this, mabey because i\'m a chick, but still... Well, the subtitles could have been put at the very begining or end of the clip because it was very distracting and took up most of the footage. I think that whores and advertizing is a good combination for the male population of the world, good point.