\"I love you Patrick.\" (I\'m Gay! -The Booger Fairy)

Way too much wind. That old guy is a great character.

Cinematography wasn\'t great, but all in all (without sound mind you) not a bad flick. It\'s cute.

this looks like it started as a good idea, that was either rushed to finish or you lost interest at the end. either way, i really liked the begining. it was all pretty good, except the audio. i really thought it was going somewhere when the old man was introduced into the story, but then it just kind of ended real quick and nothing much happened. it wasnt too bad, but seeing the begining makes me think you could have ended it better. work on some audio blending, too. it makes the cuts less obvious and the film as a whole flow better. i look forward to seeing some improvement in your next entry. i think your group has potential.

Pretty good work on this. You may want to try putting something over the mic on your camera next time, but otherwise pretty funny. The ending was the best, totally unexpected.

As Jeremy said, this said off pretty decent and then kinda lost it. The only thing I can recommend is to keep rewriting your script until it makes sense to people who aren\'t involved. The wind took a little away from this.

I dunno why, but the first sequences remind me of a Bruce Campbell film. :) That\'s a good thing!

The sound is good for the most part.. the wind is kind of annoying, but filming outside you have to deal with that.

The part with the old man kinda drags a bit, but it was funny. I got a couple good laughs. :) I was confused.. the old man says \"banana\", but sometimes it sounds like \"bandana\".. it editing could use a little work, but overall I say a great movie. The best part was the guy looking in the shed and getting thrown out. That was cool! :)

I think it was good, the wind was annoying but other than that it was awesome. It looks like you improvised alot and thats good, I hate writing scripts too.

The video has some sort of crazy pixelation going on. Im not sure if its a compression thing or a dirty tape head thing. Not a criticism, just an observation.

Some of the cuts were extremely abrupt.

The story was mildly funny. Im guessing the banana is an inside joke thing because I didnt get it at all.... or what it had to do with the evil mini ghost in the closet.

The sound was probably the best thing about the movie. It picked up relatively well, considering the environment you were shooting in.

Overall, a pretty good entry!

The beginning was very good with the banana creature in the closet, but the scenes with the old man ranting and raving just went on too long. It was pretty obvious you were cracking yourselves up with the old man character. Sometimes less is more. And the wind noise!!! Invest in a microphone sock. Overall though a decent job and keep on filmfightin', look forward to more entries.