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AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on April 7th, 2006

wow, that was weird. at first i was thinking, \"gremlins rip off\", but then that little guy was in the jar! that is a crazy mask. bunny? whatever it is, its freaky. i liked the music you chose. i gotta keep it quick here, but i dug the flick. only thing i would suggest is make more of a lighting effort and audio tranisitions. i think i say that about EVERY film, so no worries. :) great job!!!!

Avatarbandit racing
Reviewed on April 9th, 2006

Alright, I liked the little bunny effect you had going on. But I didn\'t like him as a life sized dude, it wasn\'t as cool. You need better dialogue and a better way of catching that audio. I don\'t really understand the plot of this movie or why anything needed to happen. Really work on developing more of a conflict then just have a little scene that you just happened to capture on tape.

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on April 10th, 2006

Do you guys do a lot of skate filming? I say this because fish eye lenses are typically a skate thing, not really used in a lot of other films. I\'m down with the wide-angle though, I love the \'look\' it gives.

Good FX work with the dude in the jar.

I like that you dubbed over the critter voice instead of just having them talk in the rabbit head. Maybe you could have dubbed over the other lines as well to make everything sound a little better?

Dig the music.

Avatarair7walk
Reviewed on April 12th, 2006

Great effects, guys! I think the plot moved a little slow -- you could have cut down on the dialogue at the start I think. Lighting was decent, just like sound. I like the creativity you guys put into the jar critter and the costume. :) Develop the plot a little better on the next one and you guys are gonna wail.

Avatarcara
Reviewed on April 14th, 2006

I love the special effect of the mystery thing in the bottle! COOL great camera work and editing on that part! Looking forward to more from you guys!
CARa
Sysie Intergalactic Spritual Advisor
Schizo Studios/Five Clover Films

Avatarwally_x
Reviewed on April 14th, 2006

really weird and orginal idea. The mask was REALLY cool. Slow in the begining. The music was cool. Way to dark. Should have had something more happen in the story.

AvatarAKLPhilo
Reviewed on April 17th, 2006

An interesting entry, especially with the fish eye lens effect. Your video got kind of stretched out here but that\'s something that you can easily fix. There was some \"air\" sound that you might have been able to knock out a little more with some audio work. The dude with the mask is freaking me out!

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