AvatarRiverbend Films
Reviewed on May 21st, 2006

Now im going to go play sims 2.

Avatarimmacabre
Reviewed on May 21st, 2006

amazing

Avatarloveislbind2all
Reviewed on May 21st, 2006

Woah that was some crazy awesome everything! Editing, acting, FX and so forth was truely amazing! It must have taken you forever to film the whole thing and edit it. All I have to say is crazy good.

I checkedy your myspace and it said that you live in AZ like me, that's cool man!

AvatarMush
Reviewed on May 21st, 2006

You have very high audio compression levels. I\'m just saying. But the sound was pretty good, between catching vocals getting sound effects. Good younger actors, the mom seemed a little forced. I think I liked the highspeed effects, reminded me of the Sims. Cool splitscreening, a slight bit jumpy but definitely forgiveably so. Yeah definitely seeing that the Sims similarities are intentional now. Very conveniet set you have there, for the style of film you\'re doing. Definitely dig the added sound effects. Also like the realtime/hispeed contrast in the same shot. Very cool removal-of-stuff shots. Nice parallels at the end. Definitely creepy but cool oldschool-style scifi eye-in-the-sky ending. Nice music. I like this one. Good Job.

Avatarerockrazor
Reviewed on May 22nd, 2006

Wow , Im really impressed. One of the best short films ive seen in my opinion. Good plot backed up with good everything. Awesome effects. They really made it for me. Not to mention youre kids who know what theyre doing. I cant do that crap. Great job.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on May 26th, 2006

rock on. i havent seen a dan bury flick in a while. you used to always rock the stop motion, i remeber. i walays dug that. this kids a pretty damn good actor. very unique idea for a story. you did a good job getting a potentially difficult idea across. nice job in the sets, too.

AvatarAKLPhilo
Reviewed on May 26th, 2006

A cool entry, one of the things to work on here is cutting your shots closer together, so there doesn't feel like there's a "pause" in-between when each character says one of their lines.

Some good lighting here but parts of it looks kind of yellow on the inside shots, some color correction could fix that.

Also, playing computer games = fun. Watching someone play computer games, not quite as interesting. But a cool take on living "inside of a game". cutting down the length of the computer shots might help here.

Sweet effect with the outside invisible glass and sound effects, good job! And I really like the eye looking in on the character at the end.

Hope we see more entries from your group!

AvatarDowNINwardSpiral
Reviewed on May 28th, 2006

damn man one of the best I\'ve seen in a long time

-Kyle

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