AvatarRastus
Reviewed on May 8th, 2006

I like the intro, cool cityscape. the movie seemed to be just about the guy getting a bunch of phone calls, I think that there could\'ve been more substance to the plot. I like the camera angles, the music got to be a little loud and intrusive on the dialogue, but the music was very fitting. I needed to watch it twice to get what was going on at the beginning and end, I think that you could cut the calls and had more back story... but maybe thats just me. Good job overall, best thing was the camera work, needs improvement on the delivery of the plot, give the viewer some variety to keep them interested.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on May 8th, 2006

...last summer, ;)

sexxxy camera work!!!

Avatarmillertime83
Reviewed on May 8th, 2006

very atmospheric, is there such a word? enjoyed it.

Avatarslurmsmckenzie3
Reviewed on May 8th, 2006

i wish the pan of the city skyline was a bit slower and less blurry, but oh well. it wasn\'t the most exciting short film i\'ve seen... just alot of \"i know what you did\" and \"who is this\" \'s. i didn\'t really get the ending. nothing touches your recent toothbrush entry, which was just spectacular. keep up the good work though, and continued luck to all of CPP.

Avatarkid_crochet_films
Reviewed on May 8th, 2006

Good Film, I didn\'t really understand it, but that\'s why it was interesting. Unforturnately you can almost predict it after the first phone call, but all in all, very well done, very good little short film.

Avatarlambo
Reviewed on May 11th, 2006

nice story. but it was kinda reduntant hearing the \"hello?\" and \"i know what you did\" over and over. she could have said more than that after the first couple times and given a little forshadowing. just some helpful advice from a fellow film fighter. i liked it overall.

Avatarcara
Reviewed on May 14th, 2006

I know what you did??? And I love it! cool camera work graet plot!
If you are the toothbrush winner that entry was so filled with emotion-=-emotion hard to capture between live things let alone inanimate objects! truly a work of art on \"opposites attract\" This entry captures the same emotion !
COOL!
CARA

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on May 15th, 2006

You just love those shots of the city skyline, don\'t you! I think you\'re addicted.

Beautiful camera work, I like the blues and the tone of the video. As was said earlier, the phone dialogue is terrible ... doesn\'t make any sense. This dude needs some caller ID. I think the calls just go on for too long - too many of them. The concept itself isn\'t a bad one, just a little drawn out and uninteresting. The actor could have done a lot better job.

I wish you had some kind of light you could have shown on the girl for the muzzle flash as the camera is panning away, instead of faking it.

Rating: 5/10

Avatarloveislbind2all
Reviewed on May 18th, 2006

That was pretty cool. I liked that it was really short. Really awesome. Now I got to do my hw yo.

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