Yeah, didnât really get this one, beyond he tried to make a move on the girl and then she broke up with him. But without any voice over or haiku text, again itâs hard to figure out exactly what weâre supposed to feel here.
Cool, cool.
VidBlog footage, I imagine.
Right?
Wish you guys would make something NEW. Please!
This was a cute short. I didnt find a haiku in it. But I still enjoyed the mix of music and him ridng on the kiddy right. Haha that made me laugh.
~Danielle
Kind of sit-com-ish. Unlike them though, this was entertaining. 4/5
There\'s nothing wrong with this, but it just doesn\'t do much as a haiku. The story has a definitive turning point, but it\'s not particularly dramatic or interesting.
good lgihting but onyl saw half become of filp for mac !
Great and sudden change of mood during shot 2. Well shot, well lit. I also liked this one a lot.
This one is pretty funny. We\'ve all been there... trying to make that all important move. Great slap and music cut! I feel a little disappointed with the last scene, something more comical like the rest of the film...
Was this My pirate footage? if so, I\'m sick of you guys editing bigger movies to fit a fight. It\'s just kind of a cop-out. If, it\'s a new entry. it\'s good to see you guys back. Especially since you\'re sell-outs.
Seemed kind of dark but a hard place to shoot. I enjoyed it but didn\'t love it. Nice to see something coming out of CPP at least. Finish My Pirate!
Simple little story structure, some good shots, I like the last one particularily. Would have liked to see a little more convincing slap, however.
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