Nice!

This is the first time I have seen something other than a comedy from you. I think it is great that you can and will pull it off again.

Serious same music the whole time really gets you into it. I have no idea how he dies other than that it was car related. I guess he left after a fight with his women. The pillow (or whatever) was too large. I guess everyone knows though.




As always, your love Kevin Mosley

i liked that a whole lot. the only down fall i see is that she was wearing a \"black\" bra. come on. it stands out like a turd in the toilet, you just cant miss it. other than that. nice music. good one.

Beautiful photography-tells the story expertly! Rich emotion! simplisity has it\'s voice!!!!
CARA

besides obviously missing the narrative part this wasn\'t bad at all, maybe a bit rushed. I liked the music and all, but the shots and the story just felt blown by for me, I wished for more, so that is good. Sory this one missed the show, as Rastsu says if this one was moderatly late we would have got it. haha, well, not abd, probably 3 stars from me.

Wow! Cool thanks guys, it seems to be better than we expected. I wish this was still part of the PAF with KJl, but it was kind of out of KJL\'s movie genre type. But yeah I kind of fiddled with this pre-eddited thing and added music, but nothing too drastic. I like it too, i\'m glad we made it short though, or else it would drag on with out a narrative. Orignally this was suppose to have a narrative. THANKS!