This reminds of that one spongebob squarepants film when squidward gets layed off or somthing and SB has to take care of him. I still liked this one though. Dont worry about the swearing too much, the word fuck is alowed in some parts, i\'m glad you guys put in an effort not to say it though. I thought it was very creative.

More dancing! I dig. Your video itself was encoded at a higher compression level than the other submissions. OHHH RACISM. I like the jumpy getting-on-the-roof scene. awww soda OH NOES IT FELL. I liked the falling scene\'s difference. Ah you say pop... Cracka. More ambient music would have made it smoother. interesting lighting setup. Not the best, but it worked. Hahaha the styles in this film were so random but they wound up fitting together. Nice ending shot

wow. ivan stepping up tot he plate. i have really liked him in the last two movies you have made. i dont know what made you decide to do the little dancing bit for the credits, but i loved that. this is cut together really nicely, as well. tim is a little hard to hear at times, but not to the point of annoying me. keep up the good work!

An interesting entry from Saturine, the video looks a little pixelated on my screen, guessing this might be a compression / rendering issue.

The light inside the bedroom scene was way too bright and harsh on your actor\'s faces. Try diffusing the light with some white sheets (as long as you don\'t burn your house down) and maybe placing another light on the side of the room to take away the harshness effect.

I also didn\'t get the feeling that he truly fell off the roof. We saw the Pepsi can roll and bounce, and I did like the sound effects and filters used here. But the next shot is him bouncing on the ground. A couple more shots of him struggling to reach the can might have worked here.

Overall a decent entry, work on your lighting. Keep on filmfighting

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