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TriFlix Films, "Gas Pains"
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Avatardeadstrange
Reviewed on March 6th, 2017

Great shots, but lacks a story. Would love to hear or see something that makes this a story.

AvatarTriFlix FIlms
Reviewed on March 18th, 2017

Thanks for the advice, I think I left it to vague as well. A story would have been icing on the cake :)

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on March 13th, 2017

The gas station burning really is a nice effect! I know you sort of hint at a story in your info, but it's not quite a enough that comes through in the actual video. The station on fire would be a great 3rd shot, but using it for both the 2nd and 3rd seems wasteful - would be a great capper for something that has more depth to it. Thanks for the submission though, as always!

AvatarTriFlix FIlms
Reviewed on March 18th, 2017

I couldn't agree with you more. I believe it was Niko or Wren from Corridor that said when using vfx it's best to only reveal them when needed. Using them constantly causes them to losee their 'wow' factor. Great advice! This was my first entry submitted on time hahaha. Glad to make it to the heavyweights.

Avatarelihabeita
Reviewed on March 23rd, 2017

Beautiful. Lacks story, but that makes it seem arty.

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