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TribalSharkProductions, "Tea Time"
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Avatardeadstrange
Reviewed on May 1st, 2017

Super creepy. The dialogue was a bit choppy. Try layering the audio over each other. Also, add a straight track of background noise to help. Don't always cut on the lines, show the other person's reaction. Hope to see more from you guys!

Avatarelihabeita
Reviewed on May 16th, 2017

Your shots sometimes break the 180 rule which disorients the viewer. try using less shots.

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