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Brazen Films, "Dale & Steve"
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Avatarhulk180
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

Youve got some pretty good shots happening here. I can definitely tell your shot composition is improving. You had a very good story and pretty good sound. Overall, a very solid entry.

AvatarButt-Smoke
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

This was my second favorite, it was funny because when that chick was there, it was Steve\'s voice. \"Give me the fuckin remote. You like this precious remote don\'t ya?\" God, I love this movie. I wish I could vote for both.

Avatarslurmsmckenzie3
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

this fucking sucked. my god. fuck you. bitch ass mofo. there was so much fucking cursing what the fuck, it was lame ass.

AvatarBrian_O
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

Fuck this fucking shit is a fucking peice of fuck. It started off very boring and kept that very slow momentum untill the last 10 seconds. The ending was the best part. The main problem is that the constant cursing. It was probably meant to give a little bit of comic releif but it just go tiring after a while. 2.5/5

AvatarKevin Mosley
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

Cunts, fucks, shits, and fucking whore sluts! Lighting was really lackwing. The bunny was cute add on. I would have had the price lowered by having the character suck Satan\'s cock. Satan love it that shit. \"Fuckin\' piece of fuck!\" \"This fuckin\' shit is hilarious!\"




As always, your love Kevin Mosley.

AvatarGriffin
Reviewed on October 9th, 2005

Sometimes I like watching something that makes little sense and crams as much swearing in as possible. For this reason, I actually watched all 5 minutes. The satan guy is pretty funny, so again, a reason to keep watching. Otherwise, the audio (as if I don\'t harp on it enough) needs help, so does the lighting, but the shot composition is actually pretty good. (I do have to mention, though, that it\'s a cop out to put a quiet music track behind the whole video. It\'s like saying the video is otherwise too uninteresting without constant background noise. And maybe it is.) I did find it somewhat entertaining, but the main problem here is that there is barely a semblance of the fight you entered this week. Yes, the video does appear to be titled, \"dale & steve,\" and yes, there are characters named Dale and Steve (albeit one is a rabbit), but there is certainly no mystery (just a short moment of climatic suspense), and no coming of age theme. If I were Justin, this would have been a lightweight.

Avatarmillertime83
Reviewed on October 10th, 2005

Very good. Nice shots and composition. Good editing, audio, lighting, and story. Greenscreen work was interesting.

Avatarloveislbind2all
Reviewed on October 11th, 2005

Haha I didnt mind the excesive swearing, it actually made me laugh a lot. Who ever place the mother, a guy I\'m guessying, has nice legs. The beging with the mother also reminds me of somthing I saw on ebaumsworld with a crazy bitching mother. Really funny great stuff. Excellent job.

AvatarHLR II
Reviewed on October 13th, 2005

wow. Fuck. wow. why is someone from the wall street journal selling cable?? great music. i liked this alot. good job. YES - 2 different on-rye-related groups - maybe three for the next fight!?!?

fuck.

AvatarCalamachino
Reviewed on October 13th, 2005

Some funny scenes, and interesting story. The cable guy and the Mom were pretty funny. Too much cussing though, that got real old.

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on October 13th, 2005

Are those your sexy legs mister sexy man? So smooth and silky.

The ridiculous amount of profanity is rather enjoyable. I like the close up shots, the zoom from the door handle. Great moustache and hair. The music track after \'fuckin\' dumbass\' is perfect. Blur shot of the television is nice.

I would have liked to see some more animation on the bunny, maybe some blinking or some kind of \'idle\' position. But perhaps it\'s more funny since it\'s so simple and cheap.

Nice random ending, perfect music choices throughout.

AvatarTurtle
Reviewed on October 14th, 2005

Over acted in the beginning. Camera angles were cool. I think it would\'ve been better if you guys were .. umm... drunk or something. \"ya home boy.. for like... 3... 3 bucks...\" Definately the bunny was a stoner thing.. I liked that. Overall, this was a pretty good film. The editing was great. Audio was decent.

AvatarAKLPhilo
Reviewed on October 14th, 2005

Interesting production techniques, mixing the video with the animation. The guy as the mom was a little scary though.

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