Most of your shots were well done. I like your transitions and plot (to an extent). Your dialogue timing was pretty good.

Now, SOUND !!! HOLY HELL, SOUND!! Please, fot the love of God, PLEASE unplug any and all devices making any ambient noise. Turn off the AC, unplug the fridge, keep any pets or people hiding behind the couch OUT OF FRAME!!
Your acting was pretty decent and your had a pretty good use of effects, but OH MY GOD the noise discontinuity!! It killed you. Totally.

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Although this was less professional looking then 5 clover\'s I enjoyed it alot more. The jokes were better. This had a few parts that made me really laugh. \"Un-pause\" and the back and forth on the couch. \"Dood you could have taken her to the candy shop\" Love the music from Life Aquatic. Thought the ending was alittle akward, but still funny. Maybe you could have just ended it with \"At least I still have mario\" but then again, bring the candyshop joke back was nice. I think it was so funny becuase I know nerds JUST like you guys.....wait I am one. I am clearly biased.

Very NICE!!

Are you using an N64 controller and a PS2 controller? Is this a tribute to onetrick?

Bring it on back to the old school! Throwing in the sounds of ancient video games and modern controllers is the coolest thing to do. I hope those are two different kinds of controllers --- perhaps an homage to my film a few weeks back ???

\"Out of controllers\" sounds like \'out of control,\' which is sort of funny. \"WE\'RE OUT OF CONTROLLLLLL ... ERS\"

Could have used a tad bit of trimming in the sequence when she gets to her car - (\"Mario!\" and then right to driving off, don\'t need the whole walking up). Watch the background noise when you\'re shooting outside. I heard a siren cut in and out. Also, nasty background noise from ... either the camera or the air conditioner. Always shut off the AC before recording. Or else cut down the low end of the audio.

I like that you cut right to her driving off after the \'I wanted your brother!\' - don\'t totally understand what taking a game to the candy shop means. 50 Cent reference? Did he bang the game?! What\'s going on?!?!

Plot probably could have been a smidge more coherant. Audio was good besides the background noise, shots were clear. Looked like a fun movie to make.

well, the video quality was really good. looks like you had a white balance issue. the stuff outside was really blue. audio wasnt too bad, but it would have been blended a littel better and parts were a little quiet. acting was decent. the story had a good flow, but overall wasnt very interesting. props for at least filming something. they cant all be blockbuster hits, but keep at it and get lots of practice. that way when you do get a good story idea, you will be ready to film it with pride. 2stars

Very entertaining....my only critiscism is that u cant play mario for nintendo with a playstation 2 controller and an n64 controller....believe i know....ive tried......but good job guys you\'re def funny

Josh made a gay dance video with the same music.

I like the spread vag in face and still not stopping the Mario action.