First off I love the music. I hope you made it. OH WTF?! the audio just got crazy loud and yucky. OK, maybe I just had it too loud, but it still sound icky. It seems to be out of sync, too. Maybe its the stream, lemme download it and open in QT.

Nah still out of sync. OK, this is obviously sort of a first effort, so I wont be too harsh. The acting and dialogue was decent, but here are some suggestions that would have made it easier for me to watch:

It looks like you just kinda found a big room at school or somewhere to film this. There are random people in the background that shouldn\'t be there. The camera is shaky. That can be OK, sometimes, but you don\'t see it on a new studio set. Not sure what you were filming on or editing on, but the quality was really rough. Also, try some different angles to keep it visually stimulating. The background was just a white board. Some photoshop stuff here would have helped. Green screen stuff would have really been nice.

I definitely encourage you to submit to more fights. Its too bad there aren\'t many submissions, nowadays. It really helps to see what others have done and what suggestions they have for you. It helped me a lot and many others groups as well. So keep trying and keep the submissions coming.