First off, I wouldn\'t have chosen that wipe transition for \'glory\' at the start. Would be better if it was a punchy zoom. (just me being a picky ass)

Great collage of shots. A lot could be cut, to only your favorites. I like that the cat keeps showing up. Started off with great intensity but sort of devolved. The \'kick some ass\' music rocks.

Are shirts illegal over in your parts?!

You\'ve got a good eye for the shots. I approve. You might want to splice in the audio from closer shots when you have dialogue taking place farther away.

Damn the wind, am I right? Good tip for that is to put an old box for 35mm film on the tip of themic. Makes it much more directional, cuts that blotting. I love the end credits composition. A lot of good things here, hope to see more!