Welcome Fu Manchu!!!!
I like the kind of \'fuzzy film\' effect you had in the first couple shots. When you switch to the more grainy liney effect ... I just hate that effect ... it\'s a mess.
I suggest getting some gun barrel effects from detonationfilms.com - it\'s super easy and cool.
Your voice over is a little \'blotty\' - make sure you\'re not too close to the mic or blowing right onto it. Levels are high on the eggs too. Hell, maybe it\'s all on purpose.
The egg turning and having a big stache - so good :) Love that.
\"Richard Egg is John Egg\" - hehe.
A nice little nugget of a film, I see potential, not quite HW material off the bat though.
I had some muzzle flashes on there, but they didn\'t show up when I formatted the file to be less than 11 Mb. They\'re there in the 149 Mb version.
The narration and voice-overs where suppose to be crapping because I was going for the whole \'70s blaxplotation feel.
Thanks for the criticism.
Very 70s. Hit that one on the head. Mustache is funny.
I don\'t have much to say about this one. It just sorta works for what it is. Could have used some tighter shots at some parts, and better vocal audio, but overall, not bad at all. âSon of a bitch.â
\"Son of a bitch!\" HAHA. whoever was doing the egg\'s voice was hilarious. nice job, guys.
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