Hah, electric razor sound added in is a nice touch. Watch it with the auto focus - you can see the camera gets a little wonky when you go from pure black to light. Maybe you were doing it on purpose, but it looks glitchy. Auto focus isn\'t always your friend.
Haha, the shot of the tapping feet is good. You should have kept that \'tapping\' sound from the start and slowly turned it up as he got closer. Works on a \'comedy\' scale a bit better probably the way you have it.
This is a nice little short. I would have loved to see a green screen shot from behind when he opens the door and it\'s all sunny and nice outside. I think that would have sold it for me. This is a great first entry and I\'m really looking forward to seeing more from your group!!! I see you making Heavyweights soon!!
This one was cute. The sound effects were a nice touch, especially the tapping feet.
I like the shot of the alarm clock.
Probably didn\'t need the titles at the beginning.
Electric razor was a cute touch. As was the morning scratching.
Looks almost sepia toned. Liked that alot.
Background music could have used some work. Didn\'t quite get the guys with the cleavers. Liked the matte removal and beach scene out front.
Great job!
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