First off, be careful with those tiny titles! CAn\'t read the first bit at all. Ah I see, looks like you forgot to zoom when you rendered this out. There should be an option to \'scale\' on export in your premiere project (assume you\'re using Premiere because the encoding problem is a familiar one for me). I like the 2nd shot in the battle with the slow panning around. Color correction to the dark blues seems to work well. Is that some fake red blood you added in there? Hard to tell with the tiny encode! Plopping this one in the Lightweights - some technical problems but I\'d like to see you sort them out and come back strong next time!

I also like to see that you guys made the music too -- Liked that a lot!!

I had to watch it one or two times more to figure out that the one kid grabbed the sword from him. try to emphasize something like that next time, maybe an extra shot of the hand grabbing the sword, I don\'t know.

I like small titles, when a movie is blown up on a bigger screen.

The color looks like it\'s shifted blue. I don\'t know if that is a conscious choice, but I don\'t think it works well with direct action. Personally, I think blue tints are better to show cold,0 mechanical stuff. Think T2.

That was probably a white balance issue.

The story was a little hard to follow.

I think a better make my day line would come when one of them was defeated and weaponless, right before the other guy delivered the finishing blow.

Think \"Kill me quickly\" from the Princess Bride.

Nice work, keep it up!