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J & B Productions, "Go Ahead, Make My 'Dae"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on April 14th, 2008

Augh! You encoded at a resolution higher than 320x240! It\'s a stupid thing on the site, I\'m sorry, I wish I could get it fixed ... double click the window to view the full thing. I can replace the file for you if you render a smaller rez one no problem.

Some good shots here, good color correction - you\'ve got two great actors here. Great framing on the eyes. The close up on the taller dude seems to shake a bit more than when you\'re zooming on the chef. Would have made sure to do those both on tripod. Like the SFX on the reverse shot ice cream scooper, wish you would have continued the sound effects through the scooping and plopping as well. Seems a bit lacking during that sequence. Needs those sound effects to keep it as engaging. Ahh -- looks like you added some for the sprinkles and whip cream. Well done :) I don\'t suggest speeding up shots when you\'re shooting hand held. Put er on a tripod, or else just use jump cuts would I find cooler and more effective hand held.

Good god that\'s a lot of ice cream!!! Whip its! Love the slow motion walking away scene. Would have been great to add some flash-jump cuts along with it, showing him dissapearing into the woods or something. Well done, I like to see you put some time into getting the props, good location, great actors, Heavyweight for you!

Just noticed the play on words. Epic.

AvatarMicco6
Reviewed on April 15th, 2008

Jajaja, nice play on words. Good job.

Avatarflagrant pork
Reviewed on April 15th, 2008

The backwards effects were pretty cool, but I felt very uncomfortable watching that man shovel ice cream into his mouth for so long. The ending was cool, the guy looked like a pimp strutting away.

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