Wish there was some sort of omnious music at the start of this. Dark scary tones, then when the goofy music starts it would be an even better juxtoposition. Your music is about 50% too loud for your voice over. Sort of hard to hear what\'s being said - I\'d also suggest putting up words on the screen \"LOVE IT FOREVER\" etc etc to highlight the voice over.

Love the shots of \'ingredient X.\' Hahaha, the huge list of words at the end is great. Hahahaha, the ending to this is awesome. \"That\'s for making me kill my grandpa!\" - too bad your actor wasn\'t REALLY screaming that - sounds like he was in a room and didn\'t want to actually yell. I find it\'s good to just let loose for one take and not really care what the neighbors think. Be aware of if someone is acting less intense than they should be just because of a public setting.

Some technical details keeping this from being as good as it could have been.

Nice Blood! Looks thick and great! The audio was way too low. Or the music too high. Either way it was drowned out.

I liked the music you chose. Fast beat and kind of comical too. Nice choice.

I also liked how you have quick cuts of how it was all made, although you should have had text on the screen explaining the steps, or trying to sell it or something.

Jajaja, nice acting when he takes the sip. Very funny. Funny face too. (In a total good way).

LOVED the text in the end. Very \"commercial disclaimers\" like. Rolling up really fast.

Good Job buddy! That last line seemed like a whisper. That was weird. It feels like he should have been screaming.