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Monkey-Penguin Productions, "In the Church Basement"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on May 20th, 2008

Really cool intro shot! Love the simple audio track and the music. Oof, the audio really needs some work on his first line coming in - I\'d suggest to always shoot a close up with your actor saying their lines that you can plop in for even just the audio track alone - the shot is too far away to see if the mouth matches well or not. Good insert shot of the girl - looks like your camera might have been blocking some of the light though.

Ah, good, you did an audio insert on Joel\'s line. Excellent :)

I like the priest costume.

Really good use with the cutting to black and making it all in little vinettes. Reminds me of a classic tarentino flick in that way. GREAT tease shot of the werewolf face! I like the red light in the running shot - were those brakelights from a car?

Emily! Nooo! Great two shot with the guys and the gun. Damn I really wish the audio was better on some of this dialogue, keeping it from really rocking my face off.

Awesome location - did you shoot just the exteriors at the church and the rest in your garage or something?

I kind of like that your auto focus starts going erratic when the lights go off. Makes for a cool effect.

Oh snap! Werewolf!

Emily was set up!

Ooooh, shadows shot!! Dig it.

WONDERFUL! I give this a 9/10

Avatarthenextkurosawa
Reviewed on May 26th, 2008

Thought it was pretty good.

Felt it was a little too long, but thats always the trade off; director vs. Audience. Director always wants it a little longer.

Nice job!

AvatarMicco6
Reviewed on June 2nd, 2008

Thanks Kurosawa. And I completely agree.

Thanks alot Justin. Yeah, the red glow were brake lights. Incredibly hard to do. We had to press on the brakes while driving but keepa constant speed. But I wanted the red so we kept trying.

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