Awesome job on the voice over! You guys used a little too many fade to blacks in my opinion. It seemed that every shot was ended with a fade. But i absolutely LOVED the voice overs. The woman was a really good actor. And i loved how she was doing tedious work or typing and so on while her voice over was going. Really. Great job on those.

Good opening narration. Awesome lighting in this kitchen scene. I\'m not really digging the subtle camera pan on the shot of her at the computer. Looks like a mistake. Good attention to audio by adding in the crowd sound with the girls at school. These quick zooms are a bit disorientating - you did these in post, right? Why not actually use the camera? Didn\'t zoom well enough?

Oooh, I do like the first two shots of them eating all the food, you should have kept it panning that same direction instead of mixing it up - along with including closer shots of them all eating - would have been good n\' gross. Are you zooming because you don\'t have insert shots of them talking? I\'d suggest not zooming, but just cutting to the digitally zoomed section.

Ha! OMG Hannah\'s the werewolf! Hahah, resolved very quickly. I like woman actress, great voice, she does a good job too. I see no werewolf effects, but maybe you could have just teased it with shadows?

Poor willy. I would have liked to see that last little bit AFTER the credits, I think it would have made it more effective in a \'epilogue\' kind of way.

Hey this was shot really well! Obviously the coherancy of the story could have used some work, but a step in the right direction!! I give this a 6/10

Beautifully shot.
Good sound.
Nice editing. Good use of dissolves.

Nice little piece!