Haha, nice zoom out at the start. I like that you dubbed his voice in afterwards, adds to \'cartoonish\' feel.
Oooh, I love the swish pans on the cans. Good use of sound effects in this. Whoa! Rabbit costume! Steam ear effect is great. The results may vary in the corner is good too.
Be careful to keep your room tone going in the background - either do it all in post with nothing in the background, or keep the background sound throughout the whole piece. The choppiness can be distracting from otherwise good audio work.
I would have cut the shots of the other guy walking up to the rabbit kid - no real need for that kind of set up in a commercial bit. You have a good pace going at the end, it kind of slows it down for me.
Some good bits in this! A little polish needed but not bad at all - you guys put some great effort into this (I think it might have my vote)
Wow! Awesome Zoom shot in the beginning! I liked it alot. Very funny, creative, and cartoon like too in a weird way. I loved the way he exaggeratedly shook his head. That was funny. Very comical. Like an excited little kid. Good Job!
Good job on the sound effects! That was nice. Throughout the whole thing, very very good use of comical slapstick sound effects. Jajaja, thats an awesome bunny suit.
Again, nice sound effects on the \"results may vary\". Very funny. And on the punch too. Those little quirky sounds are probably what sold it for me. Good Job Guys!
Some pretty good shots in there too. I saw a couple of focus problems. But all in all, VERY good. And managed to make me laugh too.
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