The scene was really eerie. Nice choice. Now, take every shot you have before dialogue starts and cut it in half. Also, while handheld running shots should be bouncy, they should not be THAT bouncy. All in all a good flick though.

As a whole, not very exciting but not boring either. Eerie, nice looking in general, creepy sound ambience. I like the guy following the other guy and suddenly disappearing; it\'s a nice take on the whole \"I\'m following you silently\" scene. The movie also has a weird vintage feel that I liked, probably due to the principal color tone (yellow). Great ending. I liked it.

I couldnt really find any direction for this film until the very end. It was just too long and the contstant repeative techno just degrated this film. I would have enjoyed it better if it had different music and if the running scenes were cut down to be a lot shorter. At least the shots were lit.

Almost all of the the homosexual erotica from South America starts out like your short. Boy chases boy through the night. It just a little different at the end though. \"What do you want!?\" You know what the other guy wants. With all of the weird techno building up I thought we were going to have a blow off. It was decent. Just too dark and yellow from the little light that you did have. You should have changed the white balance so it was less yellow.


As always, your love Kevin Mosley

Cool over the shoulder shot. This is moving really slowly. This beat is kind of redundant. It would be cool to hear some sound effects or dialogue. Oh-- there we go. Haha. Ok that was funny. Funny premise.