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Outlaw Pictures, "Writer's Block"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on March 15th, 2009

I think your video is being vertically distorted. Everyone\'s heads look too tall. Might want to look into that!

Cool punching man! Looks like they\'re seriously bro\'ing out.

I wish there was a funny sound to go with your \"X hours later\" - like a \"Duunnnnn!\" or a door slamming kind of title sound. Adds to the comedy factor.

Ha! TWIST. It would be hilarious if the paper that was written has something to do with the life of the excersize dummy or something along those lines.

Audio quality could have been better but this was a watchable 2:31

AvatarOutlawPictures
Reviewed on March 15th, 2009

I think the heads look fine on my computer. Not sure what you mean.

Yeah I seriously was thinking of adding a "duuuuunnnnn" like in The Shining but I decided it worked well without it. Adds to the boring monotony of the whole thing.

Yeah the audio does kinda suck. We banged this out in like a half hour, not a lot of time worrying about audio and stuff lol.

May i ask why this was a lightweight? Audio? Something I'm not aware of?

AvatarBryan Fox
Reviewed on March 26th, 2009

There were some good ideas in this, but I honestly feel this should have been a lightweight. The audio is horrible. I can\'t understand what anyone is saying, and the lighting leaves much to be desired. Check out some youtube movies about better lighting for amateur films. There\'s a lot of inexpensive ideas out there.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on April 6th, 2009

who i the bad ass that fights that armless dude?! hah. wonder if he wrote that story with his johnson... great to compete with you dudes. hope to again, soon.

AvatarOutlawPictures
Reviewed on April 7th, 2009

Hey thanks, man. Great flick you made too. We're working our asses off to make a sweet film for next month. We're running low on time but hopefully we'll bang it out. Hope to see you there!

Avatarkaitron21
Reviewed on April 13th, 2009

Dang, that armless punching man is creepy hahaha. Nightmares.

I really like your story idea, especially the twist at the end. It would\'ve been cool if maybe the writer himself was doing something weird/hilarious after each passage of time.

For banging this out in a half hour, it\'s pretty good.

AvatarOutlawPictures
Reviewed on April 19th, 2009

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed. Yeah it's not bad for a half hour of work and brain storming but I feel I jipped ourselves a little bit. We should've tried harder especially with the level everyone else's films are at.

Yours was great! Really liked it a lot. I hope to compete with you again one of these days. G

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