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Clarity/FAST - Supergroup, "Writer's Block"
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Avatarpancakeparty
Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

Alright, so this vid is a little random. it didn\'t really deal with the topic, but it was sill pretty good.
that fish tank\'s insane!
i really like writer\'s block montage, it flowed really well and got to the point quickly and efficiently.
you really need to de-interlace your footage though. there are lines all over the place.
ha sandwiches are the best prop! she put so much mayo on that!
LOL a swinging skully!
why did the alien come the first time when there wasn\'t a green light in the window?

I think you guys have a good eye for composition. i can learn alot from this vid. I just wish you would\'ve stuck to the objective and resolved the writer\'s block issue.

Avatarcurlyfries
Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

man i thought this was justin's review at first lol

well anyway, it was all that Ms. Pancakeparty said.

The chick with the swinging skully totally reminded me of that long-haired guy from Lost. ~Hugs chick~ "It's alright dude" lol.

You had two very good and different characters that saved this from being a plain little short. The Google guy and the Swinging Skully chick.

Interspecialty LOL best line. But scenes fit in very nicely and you incorporated overlapping dialogue nicely. Different shots were shown while dialogue continued, nice.

-Chris

Avatardvdcrazy
Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

Haha...WOW.

This film started off one way and did a complete U-Turn off a cliff afterwards storywise. Thats not a bad thing though.

Kudos to Talking Heads. It worked well for the montage.

Acting was a bit rough at some parts, but overall, it was solid.

Love the teddy bear. I laughed out loud to that.

The only problem i have with the story is you never resolved the Writers Block issue. I love random stuff. This was hilarious. But you never concluded the main topic of conflict. But overall, a funny weird short film.

AvatarHLR II
Reviewed on March 17th, 2009

The chick with the swinging skully totally reminded me of that long-haired guy from Lost. ~Hugs chick~ "It's alright dude" lol.


and that is why I never put myself in my own movies.... Its alright, I know i'm fat.

AvatarPlatt22
Reviewed on March 17th, 2009

haha this movie has made me repulse mayonnaise

AvatarBryan Fox
Reviewed on March 26th, 2009

Even though it\'s a stretch for the topic, I laughed my ass off! This would be my fav entry this week. I also feel this is the most technically superior entry this month in terms of lighting. I think you need to remember to deinterlace your entry before you submit however. On scenes with a lot of movement, I saw jaggies that really kill the mood here and there.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on April 6th, 2009

Hay QTs! we gotta review SHOW soming , soon, so i wont write one here. besides, its OUR movie. just wanted to say that the alien and the dude that got effed in the A are brothers in real life. ;)

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on April 13th, 2009

Ok! My review! Can\'t believe I haven\'t got to this yet.

Video and lighting looks great --- very clear, love the blue fish tank in the back.

Watch the \'black lines\' on the sides of the video - always best to zoom in your footage to remove those. They\'re for playing on a TV ... for some reason TVs like those black bars.

Oh goodness! A green guy! (and interlacing ... I don\'t know which is scarier ...).

Haha, this humping scene is pretty funny - abrupt and random. Meagan is a great actress! I love that teddy bear.

Dunno about the cut after \"How was your night?\" - probably would have been better to cut after he says ... \"I was ... I was hot ...\"

Ew that\'s a lot of mayo! Swinging skelly! I love skellys. Augh, I can\'t stand interlacing!!!!

I remember some other movie about alien boning -- wasn\'t that Jeremy\'s? Or maybe a ghost or something? I think I recall it from watching the old DVD.

Haha, \"They have a name for this shit ??\"

I would have liked a \"SWOOOSH\" sound on those push transitions. Kinda tame without a sound cue.

Awesome green light!

Whoa, that\'s some seriously alien humping. Dude can\'t get enough! WHOA. Great platter. I love the splatter credits! Very very nice, looks great! I wouldn\'t have put the credits sideways though, they could probably have fit okay as smaller text on the side and been right-side up.

Overall, I found this pretty watching, maybe a bit slow and could have used some more spiffing up in terms of sound fx and transitions and whatnot (and the interlacing, oh god the interlacing!) but I enjoyed myself watching it.

Avatarkaitron21
Reviewed on April 13th, 2009

Hahahaha WTF?!?!?!

Definitely had me cracking up. It drifted way off the Writer\'s Block theme, but it drifted off into uh well hilariousness.

Ugh mayonnaise is ruined. Forever haha.

What is a swinging skully? A couple people have mentioned it, and I\'m lost hah.

Very good work. Interesting, well set-up shots, good acting and a comical script. Kudos, yo.

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