Could you email me a downloadable version of your film? Upload it to drop.io or something like that please (it\'s for my review show I\'m making)

Here are my QUICK notes on the video.

I love the lighting. I love the black and white - the first couple shots are great. I think the lead actor looks the part - LOVE the casting. May not be the most amazing actor but I love his look! It\'s great. I don\'t feel so great about using the on-board camera light in the later scenes, but I understand you gotta do what you gotta do.

Also think you did a great job on the muzzle flashes.

I\'ll have a full video review once I get that FILE!

Very glad you decided to put this into black and white. The lighting is excellent in the beginning of the film especially when the detective is in silhouette but as the movie continues, the lighting begins to get very spotty which makes for annoying images. This may have been on purpose but next time try to find a fill light and back light in order to produce a more realistic image rather then something that looks like it should have been shot on stage. The most important aspect of a black and white film is the lighting because of the absence of color, and you seem to dull down your lighting much too much and camera spotlights are pretty gross. Music is very appropriate though. Some of the shots are a tad out of focus (not sure if this was because of the compression process or because you just didn’t focus your lens but think about that more next shoot). Great shot with the shadow of the victim hanging. Continuity issues at some points as to where a character should be entering screen especially as the detective chases the dude in the mask. They both should enter into frame the same way. The acting is pretty good for amateurs and I really enjoy the story as a whole.

Good movie. I just don\'t think enough people are going to get the internet humor. I\'ll save the rest of my comments for the review show my group\'s cooking up.

You sir, have done the very best out of all of us in regards of lighting. No one else in my opinion has captured the shadow and dark film noir look better than you. Main actor and the actor playing anonymous very natural delivery. Who doesn\'t love a good pedo bear joke? Great writing! \"I did it for the lulz\" should be in the \"on the waterfront\" remake starring you guys. Everyone else is yelling at you for the audio so I think you got the message. Very enjoyable, all around A!

Witchi is my uncle\'s last name. HEHE. I am diggin\' hard contrasts. Noooo, don\'t hang yourself, funny hat guy. The shadow of that dude\'s pony tail is neat. Great music choice. Original score? Uh, oh. The V for Vendetta guy. Ah, shit. Another twist ending. He should have said \"I did it all for the Nookie.\" Not really, cause that song sucks.

My review show is up: http://vimeo.com/5109336