This was a tricky one for me. I like your scene transition. VERY cool effect. I think this was a good start - I would have liked to have some dialogue in the 2nd shot - I mean someone pulls a gun and your characters would be screaming and freaking out. Also, the gun \'cocking\' sound was very unconvincing. I don\'t think the main guy at the end reacts appropriately either. Like I said, was on the fence but ultimately this squeaked into lightweights. I think you\'ll make it up to HW next fight! You guys got the goods!

Nice, a 17sec revenge movie! Didn\'t know it could be done. And there\'s even a flashback! Word, guys. Nice job.

there probley should have been screaming in the 2nd shot and the gun shot effect didnt look to real, but the acting was pretty well done and i like the 2nd shot, filmography was pretty good
just add a bit more sound and life into it and the next one will be great!

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