Pretty decent. I like the music. I\'m not a huge fan of cross fade transitions. My main problem is your text is very hard to read. Too bad the guitar playing in the video doesn\'t match the music.

Dang, I wish you would have been able to use your own song. Also I agree with justin on the text being hard to read. I do like your crossfade though, because with the combination of the slow panning and the cross fading it gave the video a peaceful feeling.

Poetic. Very cool of you to keep it as Haiku as possible.

I really liked this- only critism.. should have had a white shadow or something behind the text as it was hard to read- took me 3 viewings to get it all. good job.

Song choice was nice, great first shot of the guitar fret , lighting felt a little orange for my tastes, but the type was impossible to read. I would suggest fixing the type and swap out the youtube video. After watching it a few times, and picking up the haiku, it has a lot of potential. Deep stuff, good work!

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