I was on the fence about this one. Not sure how I feel about such a religious theme, but I really liked the first shot with the ring, the sped up painting shot is very cool - it says you filmed in a cathedral - too bad you didn\'t zoom out more to show the whole space instead of just the cross, or shot another scene there. All in all produced pretty well.
What's wrong with a religion theme? I like it, very cool. Different.
thanks for the reveiw! means alot that i finally got in to heavy weights
i dont understand why you didnt like the religious theme but it is your opinion and i respect it
thank you very much the 2nd shot is my favortie, took a while to put togther
and i tryed zooming out at the cathedral but it didnt loook so good, it was quite dark there
thanks again for the chance
At the beginning I think all I hear is \"the cross I wear\" and that would be only 4 syllables. Sorry I don\'t want to bust your chops, but it seemed important to mention. I liked the song you picked, and the video was feel good.
Noticed the same thing about the opening line. I don't mind the religious theme for this though. I always felt Haiku traditionally evoked a deep feelings on a subject and that is obviously present here.
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| Title: | Valentine's Day Haiku |
| Genre: | Video Haiku |
| Time: | 0:17 |
| Rules: | Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
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