Dude, you NEED to do a Dr. Who video. You could SO be an amazing Dr. Who. If you ever come to NYC we will make the best Dr. Who movie of all time. I swear it.

The \"This must be stopped\" line is way too loud compared to the other ones (intentional?).

I like your use of Comic Sans. One of the kings of the font world. The shot of you melting into the bush is pretty rad.

All in all this video is what I\'d expect from you. Ridiculous, silly, kind of awful, but hell it\'s --- haha ... wow the ending. I love the collab. Haha. You\'re such a peach.

Dude you\'re the king of the LWs.

Ah...I remember all those old KJL movies. I hope you submit to next fight!

Review show is up: http://vimeo.com/7118727

I like it. I like the beginning, It\'s suppose to be poor quality and cheap costumes and effects. Enjoyed the obviously bad cuts. Hopefully I\'m in on the joke, but its about no matter how good you think your idea is your still making a short crappy little film for some internet website. I had nice little laugh and got to catch up on some of your older films. Great job!

It sounds like you made this while trying not to wake someone up. I assume that's actually the case, but all the whispering really removed the intensity of your story. Also, I love close-ups, but didn't see any. Try for more visual variety or plotting out shots, even if it's just shooting every shot twice, as a medium then close-up, so you have some editing choices.