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Pirate Hooker Status, "Your Mom's Going to Hell"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on January 3rd, 2010

It's pirate hooker status! Back in the game! So, obviously you guys are just doing this to have some fun. Hey, that's cool. "If you keep talking, your mom is going to hell!" - uh oh. Brought his mom into it!

Could use more shot variety in this opening sequence. Zooming looks sloppy in the hallway. What kind of area is this? A dorm? Barracks?

Very hard to hear what you're saying to each other in the hallway.

Ha, great ring tone! Haha.

I think your acting at the end is actually not bad at all. Too bad you laugh at the end! To me, that's the stongest point of the video, wish we had a close up or some kind of different angle to really feel the pain of your main character!

I give this film a D+

Avatarciwi286
Reviewed on January 4th, 2010

The sound quality on some shots wasn't great, hard to hear what people were saying, and some of the cuts felt off, but I love how the guys friends just laugh "told ya so" at the end. Great comedic contrast to the atmosphere built around the phone call.

AvatarCharmingNewSociety
Reviewed on January 9th, 2010

Douchebags... douchebags... douchbags. I'm so glad I didn't go to collage. Lol. Decent continuity. Too slow paced though for the particular punchline you went with.

AvatarWesScog
Reviewed on January 15th, 2010

You guys definitely seemed like you just wanted to have some fun, but this could have been better with some help.

Your acting was actually pretty funny, and realistic since it seemed like you guys were having a regular "guy" conversation. But I think you need to loosen up a bit and work on a more natural delivery.

Your cinematography needs work, "guys sitting on couch with game controller in hand", is a shot I see WAAAAAAY WAAAAAY to much, and then holding it there like the camera is on a tripod, with no cuts or edits, it needs work, and with better sound and camera work, I think the jokes could have come through better, since visually it was uninteresting.

Nice ending.

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