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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on October 24th, 2009

Your aspect ratio is all weird on the FF intro. Looks like it's zoomed in and off-center! I love the shot of the moon. Very cool. I also think it's pretty funny seeing the actor play both parts. Looks like an indy mogul effect for the werewolf? That nose is super crazy looking. I think this could have used a quick shot of his eyes as he's changing, something to drive home the concept that he's changing and morphing.

The shot of him at the end goes too long - I'd also like to see the girl's reaction to him changing before just screaming and running away. Could have used some more lighting. I like the monster growl sound effect.

But yeah - let's see what ya do next time! I like your spirit!

Avatarfruityflutefilms
Reviewed on October 25th, 2009

Thanks so much!
The werewolf effect was inspired by the indymogul one! I love that show!
we just used some nose putty and crepe hair! pretty simple!
Thanks again for your review and tips!
Can't wait for the next fight!

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

Pretty decent little idea for the mini-fight. Like I said with a couple of the others, it was almost a little too simple to really make it to the HWs. That was, of course, the main challenge of this fight. Technically it seemed pretty good. The establishing moon shot was helpfully for setting up that they were outside. I liked how their faces were lit, but seeing some background might have been nice. Cool werewolf costume. Would have preferred the shot to have been less of him looking up, and more of him looking at the camera, so we could see his face. What was with his long nose? haha. That was weird, but funny. Not really a lot of advice to offer. I want to see what you bring to the table with a longer fight.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

btw, great job on being the ONLY group with the correct title!

AvatarTheCoveShorts
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

i loved the "girls" dialogue/acting, especially the "kiss me." Good idea, i think it just needed a good last shot/ending to take it to the next level.

Avatarfruityflutefilms
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

thanks so much!
I really appreciate the feedback!
See you at the next fight!

Avatarfruityflutefilms
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

thanks jeremy!

This is our first time submitting to filmfights and everyone has been so helpful and friendly! I really like this site!

Thanks again!

AvatarTheCoveShorts
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

i loved the "girls" dialogue/acting, especially the "kiss me." Good idea, i think it just needed a good last shot/ending to take it to the next level.

AvatarAlasdair
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

too obvious dude we've all seen thriller

Avatarfruityflutefilms
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

i guess

AvatarDavidSegerAOK
Reviewed on October 28th, 2009

It aint easy being a monster. Man oh man. You got that right.

AvatarHLR II
Reviewed on October 29th, 2009

woah. You win the costume contest. I thought bad boy vampire waiting in line did. Watch how long your shots are and try to vary your shots (Medium Shot/Close UP/Wide Shot - Etc). That is all. ;)

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