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Synaptic TV, "Period"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on October 24th, 2009

Haha, Olivier. So gross. I hope girl's done actually talk like this. I think the shot where you leap at them could have been hand held for more impact, since the whole thing is so simple otherwise, on the tripod. Really punch in the IMPACT of that moment. The blood spraying is hilarious.

I would have also kept zooming closer and closer to the vampire as the girls keep talking - build up the tension there.

Haha, did you re-render a special intro for yourself with red lights for this? :D

Haha, all your expressions are so great.

I should have had you remove the credits at the end, or at least make them a single frame or something. You can always resubmit and it'll refresh your file and keep all your views, votes, etc. Also, your text looks all funky in the background.

Anyway, fun entry!!! Always a treat to have ya in here :D

Avataralvirnexc
Reviewed on October 25th, 2009

This one is going to be really tough to beat i think, your vampire's facial expressions were great and the blood spray scene and the legs scene were amazing, when i was watching it i didnt think you would go there, but you did, and you pulled it of excellently, just absolutely hilarious.

AvatarAlasdair
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

that is the hottest fucking thing i've ever seen. vaginas are scary though!!!

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

OMG! FUC KING HILARIOUS!!! This is very similar to an idea I thought of not long ago. My only criticism is that the vampire makeup was not good and that it ended very abruptly. I heard you had to cut your credits out, so that may be part of the harsh end cut. Other than that, I loved it. Perfect short gag idea for this mini fight.

Avataralffarr
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

Oh... Jesus...

The blood spatter on the refrigerator was pretty great, and I actually really liked the abrupt ending, it made me chuckle.

AvatarTheCoveShorts
Reviewed on October 26th, 2009

hmmm, im glad somebody went there. the vampire had some good reactions, really good. I couldnt hear the girl that well though, maybe do single close up shots for better audio, then get a close up reaction shot of the other girl and the vampire to make it funnier. You probly should throw in a POV shot from the vampire there at the end... JK, im not a creep, just a bad joke.

AvatarOutlawPictures
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

Wow, hysterical! Excellent job, f'n GREAT idea. It's crazy close and I was utterly shocked so see you go as far as you did in the last shot lol. It really made it that much better though. Love the girl screaming as blood sprays on her, very nice.

AvatarBryan Fox
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

YES! What Alasdair said! This was superb! Laughed my ass off and the abrupt ending was fine.

AvatarJames
Reviewed on October 27th, 2009

Hahahaha. Wow. Wasn't expecting that at all. It was a little hard to tell that he was a vampire at first, but I got it eventually. Maybe next time do a little more of a setup for that? I know it's hard with only 30 seconds though. Anyway, good job, I liked it a lot.

Avatarrlatham
Reviewed on October 28th, 2009

wow...just wow, that was definitely the most unexpected of the whole bunch. the period bloodspray must have been a ridiculous effect to pull off without laughing your ass off. Good show sirs.

AvatarCoughFilms
Reviewed on October 28th, 2009

Hey, didn't Shane Dawson do this first? Period Cup??

AvatarJustin
Reviewed on October 31st, 2009

Shane Dawson is a scourge on the internet

AvatarDavidSegerAOK
Reviewed on October 28th, 2009

Uh oh - I think this has my vote. Periods are funny. I'm not done watching all of them yet, but a PERIOD/VAMPIRE joke is far superior to a well done VAMPIRE/AIDS joke or a mild VAMPIRE/GAY joke.

AvatarHLR II
Reviewed on October 29th, 2009

OH. MY. GOD. NICE SHOT AT THE END!!! that seriously shocked me and had my jaw drop. Your actress was a good sport -- i don;t think i would have anyone jumping to do that.

Loved to see the vampire transition slowly betwen shots -- and his reaction -- funny to see girls talk about that stuff in front of guys - it does happen. The only thing i would have done different with the shots was vary them. They are all a wide shot. with the 2-shot of the ladies it is totally understandable. but with the vampire you should have had a MS/CU/whatever cut it. Just advice. maybe see how nervous he was really getting.
BUT SERIOUSLY: MY FAVORITE ONE!! You got my vote! Most creative idea/concept by far! My only question now is: Is she a vampire since hte blood has already left the body -- lol.

Avatarhippojuicefilm
Reviewed on November 7th, 2009

Wow...

AvatarDTVPRESENTS
Reviewed on August 26th, 2010

bravo...took it to the limit...love stuff like that..very funny and cool..some will say eww but forget about them..haha..once again..bravo

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