Amusing. Works very well as a joke haiku.
The footage lacks colors probably due to a low budget cam. Sorry.

Sorry, it felt like you just weren’t really trying here. Wasn\'t really funny.

Cute little 3 shot concept. The haiku itself was pretty funny, I don\'t totally understand the last shot, but I assume it was you stuffing cereal down your pants.

Kay?
This was the lamest entry.
No other comment worth being said.

Was he just beating off to cereal? 1/5

Haha, well at least this was a haiku. It was pretty funny, and random. I am interested in seeing more from you guys in later filmfights.

~Danielle

Fortunately this video lives up to the author\'s name. Aside from the usual criticisms - poor audio, poor lighting, self-indulgence of the creator, there\'s nothing wrong with this video. There\'s just not a whole lot right either.

This is indeed retarded crap, relegate it to the lightweights

An amir wannabe? I\'m out of the loop.

Indeed, retarted crap. I didn\'t like it. It was too.. typical. I didn\'t chuckle. You\'ll grow out of this kind of humor as you continue film making. Can\'t wait to see where you guys go.

Too random for me. I didn\'t really enjoy it. The shots were too dark. Keep shooting.

I laughed the first time around at the ridiculous haiku dialouge. But with repeated viewing my interested waned.

Sucked.