"Smoking Satan's cock" is such an intense line. I like the look of your lead actor. I think you'd be able to use him in a lot of other cool stuff. Looks like a great 'tough guy' character.

I think the opening shot is VERY strong. Opening to some dude taped up, getting slapped ?? I mean that's a great attention-getter.

Obviously having the last shot of blood splattering all over the wall would have been ideal to wrap this one up. Like the lines, but could have used better audio quality on the guy speaking, and maybe a couple shots to setup where they were (dark cellar? creepy school building? shack in the middle of the woods?)

This should have been a HW. doesn't even compare to the other LWs.

I think the only thing that held you back was not using all 30 seconds to take the audience on more of a journey. The shot composition is wonderful (and wonderfully simple), and the dialogue is certainly interesting, but it doesn't provide the level of story arc that many of the other entries have. It feels more like a snippet of something longer - like we're missing part of it by only seeing this segment.

I agree, this should be in the heavyweight section if solely based on the film itself (fair enough it was ten secs under). Well edited, great dialogue as Justin pointed out and genuinely funny - very tongue n' cheek.

I thought this was a pretty good idea for the minifight. Good dramatic lighting, if the white balance might have needed just a little adjustment. The dialogue was delivered really good. I especially liked the "suckin satan's cock" line. Great job, guys!