Hey guys! Some very cool shots here. I like your color correction, but it seems like it's a bit scattered. Dark here, light there, green here, blue there. Best to keep one the whole way through.
Love the shiny bucket shot. Love the axe. Love the "TURKEYY!!!" line. I'm not sure if you were trying to make a 30 second trailer here or what. Very scattered. Some good shooting through, and I think you guys could do something very cool with a longer format, and more explained plotline.
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Thank you for your comment, it is very helpful. I think we would do better with a longer format, plus we were short on time because we filmed it all yesterday and edited it all today. Thanks
Ok could you have swung the axe any slower.
Good music and some solid shots but other than that-- rather confusing.
Lots of aesthetically interesting shots, but the focus of many gets lost (it's hard to tell what the audience is supposed to learn from some shots). For instance, the final shot looks awesome, like Justin said, but I have no idea what I'm looking at - what it means that that hand is sticking out. So I think if you can take this type of pace and these kinds of shots, but plan sequences that better get a point across, you'll be golden.
Thank you for your criticism, I'll try and do what you say next time. By the way, my brothers and my dad really like your video.
Whoa, what the heck? That was really cool. I think you aspect rtio got a litte effed up, though. I liked the effects you used on the film to make it look grungier (unless you just filmed it straight and your camera did that for you). I felt like I was watching a trailed, but it needed title work. Aside from the absence of some needed titles, I really enjoyed this. Kinda freaky, too.
Sorry for some grammatical errors, here. You can tell i was getting tired...
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