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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on December 7th, 2009

Olivier made the great Christmas intro that we're all enjoying.

I wish we would have focused more on the car instead of the guy staring at the car - I think it would be like a POV kind of thing ... the car sees him ... he sees the car ... like they're dancing a dance of seduction with each other.

Other than that - good shooting, good audio, simple idea, didn't drag too long, that's all ya need to make the heavyweights folks! I give this a B rating.

Avatarolivier
Reviewed on December 8th, 2009

Having more than 30 minutes to film this short film I would certainly go in that direction along with taking the time to select a seducing car instead of the first one we crossed that wasn't completely dirty.

Avatar17thletterfilms
Reviewed on December 8th, 2009

Ew.
Hahaha. I liked that this was totally not what I was thinking when I saw the contest prompt. A nice, short, PSA, that's edited well and is funny, but gross. I dunno if it'll get my vote, but it definitely was interesting.

AvatarJeremy
Reviewed on December 8th, 2009

HA! That is just hilarious! I appreciate a short entry to a full length fight. Just goes to prove using the full time limit is not necessary for a good video. I think you could have gotten a little more intimate with the car to really drive the point across that he was going to have sex with it. Finger fucking the exhaust or something maybe?. Graphics definitely helped. I really liked this entry.

AvatarRedhandStudios
Reviewed on December 11th, 2009

Shot very well! You went funny instead of mopey and sad, and I dig that!

AvatarEmmerek
Reviewed on December 11th, 2009

to be honest, I didn't get it the first time, I thought it was a car commercial. Maybe to make it more obvious you could of had a shot with him behind the car and like an unzipping sound of his pants. then cut to the MTD title. This was very interesting, I wonder how you came up with this idea. This was good.

Avatardeadfrogsociety
Reviewed on December 12th, 2009

I like the concept, it was pretty funny.

Avatarheadhuntinghoboproduction
Reviewed on December 14th, 2009

I had to watch it twice for it to completely sink in. Just wasn't expecting that. Very funny and to the point.

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