The idea of going to hell for cheating in video games is funny. I'd say it's probably a better idea to use subtitles on your films - your english is pretty good, but subtitles are cool!
I think your ringtone is cool. Lots of great ringtones this fight!!! Why doesn't the evil guy make a sound when he appears? or maybe pop in like a smoke effect, or something more exciting!
This seems to share some themes with the sometimes funny christmas film, ha. "I see that you haxed on day of defeat!!!"
I haven't played DoD in a while. I remember it was a big deal for a while.
Oh no! It was all a dream! I have a feeling something dramatic is going to happen here at the end. What does the screen say at the end? That you've been banned for haxing? Need a close up of that!
In summary, your audio isn't very clear, your lighting is quite dark - you could use some subtitles and some more pizazz with the appearance of Satan. I liked the concept but could have been taken a lot farther!
Overall I give this film a C-
Thanks for the tips Justin.
I didn't find any good pop sund effect and when I did try add some smoke it failed :(. Lol I didn't know that your film and my film has same themes. Yes your right it was just dream and in the end it says "Your account has been banned" sry for there wasn't any close up because of Fraps.
And still thanks for telling what went wrong and hopely they are cleared on next movie. :)
This was our first movie on FF!
The story was made in one day and we shoted it in one day. And yes we know that our english wasn't so good (I was the devil).
We used a Canon FS200 with out microphone (I'm going to buy one soon.) and without lightning because I'm not good with lightning things :P.
And in the end it says "Your Valve account is banned."(sry bad quality of fraps.
This is not our best movies but it's not worst (or is it?).
But hey it's our first movie on FF and please coment because I want to learn more of what went wrong etc.
Interesting concept....I would have preferred to actually have seen it subtitled with you speaking in your native language. Surrealistic material always seems to work better on me in subtitles. :)
I was thinking the same thing about the subtitles! I love foreign films with subtitles ( no dubbing! yikes) and this would have been awesome with them. partly becuase of what was stated earlier, surreal plots are cooler with subtitles.
I agree with the subtitles. My main gripes have already been mentioned. The sound quality and lighting, and the last screen where it says hes been banned.
I like the idea of him going to hell for cheating! :D
"im not coming an yer birthday, I'm playing day of defeat, shaddap!"
I laughed hard at that, real hard.
Maybe some close ups of the actors when they say their lines next time.
Nice desktop background. ...Is this whole thing just the kid playing video games? It gets tiring, to be honest. Is the shots intentional where half the Devil's head is cut off? Decent little film but I would say you need to change up your angles a bit more. I also this this could have been shorter (But I digress, as my entry is over 6mins).
Nice desktop background. ...Is this whole thing just the kid playing video games? It gets tiring, to be honest. Is the shots intentional where half the Devil's head is cut off? Decent little film but I would say you need to change up your angles a bit more. I also this this could have been shorter (But I digress, as my entry is over 6mins).
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