Hell's Cinema! Welcome to film fights! You have a very intense film group name! I like teh colors and composition of this first shot. Why are those lines on his hand? Watch the focus on your lips close up. I like that you're setting up the shots in this way - close ups look great. Why cut away from the music when they're pushing the jam back and forth? Hah, I love that you just run outside to fight for no reason.

Can't we all just get along and share the jam?? I would have added some more shots showing how the jam was almost gone - seems like there's still plenty of it left in the jar for both of them. Maybe a last scrape of the kife trying to get up the last bits?

Some good shots at the end, Chariots of Fire music is funny, hah. Gun out of no where! I think we need to see a wider shot at the end when he gets shot - I'm not sure where any of it is coming from.

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Another of my biggest favorites this week. You have had the courage to fight about something ordinary and I was hoping that someone would do that. The down to earth element gives this film a depth that I love. Very good.

the blurring was over used, i think you could have stopped the blurring after the first punch as sort of an attention grabber, because it feels like a dream, also, the fighting was nicely done, the acting was good

Get these kids an agent. Awesome job on the fight scene, however around 1:00 the sound effect isn't synced up with the punch. It would have been nice to actually here a gunshot sound at 1:20.

Keep up the great job.