Audio is really terrible on this. I like how you did a 1984 thing. Careful with whipping around the camera and holding it by hand - looks like you're getting some CMOS 'wobble' in there. I guess you were trying to emulate a kid's show - or maybe a blog ... I could see a blog making sense.

Are you supposed to be coming in on our TVs or something? A "tv" effect to show that would be good. Maybe an effect on your voice to make it scarier.

I like that you stuck true to the propaganda theme, execution needs a lot of work, careful with your audio quality (redub it if you have to!). Glad to have you, and stick around and keep entering!

I love the idea, but the audio kind of killed this. The tile floors and walls give this a grungy hospital feel, which I thought looked great!

Pretty good idea, here. What's up with the audio, though? I am going to guess this is more of a problem with you camera, than something you actually did wrong. Still could have did some sound editing (blending, transitions).A few of the cuts were abrupt. Neat idea, just not great from a technical aspect. Glad you finally entered something!

I tried watching this a couple times and I just can't make out what's being said at all. My hearing isn't great as it is, so the audio buzzing made it impossible for me. But I gathered a enough from context, I think. At the very least I'll give you credit for your prop work. Love the posters and the cutout of the face. Paper props are always fun.

He-heh! "If you don't, we'll knoooow!" That's a credible threat. Like it. This is a lot like Clockwork Orange, by the way.

the audio wasnt the best, im sure you know that tho, the kids voice was a nice touch and the signs were very propaganda-ish, Are you british?

I like the idea of this being a children's show from Orwell's 1984, very cool idea. Honestly, I can't understand a word of this though, other than "Even if they're your parents!"
I think it would have been worth it to re-record your voice for this one. The concept is great, just work on your execution more and you'll be golden. (not literally.)

You are so excited in this, it's fantastic.

Once again reminding us that Big Brother isn't only stoic men on vidscreens.