Haha, the first lines make me laugh. "Hey you! Whoa!" --- did you guys intentionally make this really awkward and weird? It's got some charm to it for sure! Sound effects are very cheesy. Wish there was a satisfying 'thunk' or something at the end if the skinny dude gets killed. Seems like it's missing that punch at the end.
Very fun watch - not a heavyweight, but a very fun lightweight. I give this film a C rating
The acting is enjoyable even if you aren't taking this at all seriously. When you make more movies you'll soon run into people saying an action needs to be motivated. As here, what's their reason to fight? The first guy says hey and the other throws his cards.
Great job on the effects. Love the ending with the ax. Don't be afraid to show a bit more enthusiasm for the hitting. You can simulate real punching and slapping with the right camera angles.
Woah, WOAH! well acting wasnt great, but the gunshots looked awsome. that about all i can say, it was kinda short and i feel like you could have done more.
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