The Expendables
Genre: AnyRules: You know that AMAZING ACTION movie coming out? Called "The Expendables"? We want your take on the TITLE of the movie; what else or who else is expendable? No action allowed.
Reviews for: Bloch Films, "Rough Day at the Office"
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There are 8 reviews of this film, have you added yours yet?
There are 8 reviews of this film, have you added yours yet?
First off - your film was stretched oddly when you submitted it - feel free to send it in again if you want your video to look higher quality. I had to fix it myself manually.
Okay, on to the film! So, they're battling like in their minds? Or they're actually in this dark room? I found that somewhat confusing. I get the idea that the world "darkens" around them as they get into this intense battle. Wish that last shot was a wide cut of the dude with his shirt off but they were back in the normal office setting - so it was a 'snap back to reality' kind of thing - would have had more of an emotional funny punch to it as well. Weird that they actually GO to some room to hvae this silly fight, haha.
Love the slapping, very silly. Great actors, great look - that really made this one for me. Solid lighting too. Just think the ending could have been tweaked a bit! You guys are REALLY GOOD! Super pumped to see ya on the site! Stick around, let me know what you think we could do better, as a first-timer.
Overall I give this film a B+
I love your sense of humor! The lighting on the "sumo" is amazing, very sinister. (Tri-force tat? Wicked!!) I like that you went for comedic fight on this one! My only concern here (and it is a very large one I have had on my projects as well) is sound. The slap fighting is cool, but the slap noises are way to subdued.
Great job, keep 'em comin'!
Even though is is approximately as long as the other films it seems much shorter to me maybe because it's just nice, simple and entertaing!
Good job on making this overdramatic. Like the lighting on the fight. The editing is well-timed.
I can't really spot something that's WRONG.
Like Justin said it would've been cool if you changed back to the 'normal office' for the last two shots of the fighting guys.
Very funny. I laughed out loud. The acting in this was very, very good.
I wish I had a more original critique, but mine is the same as a couple of others. It feels very odd at the end once they are called out and not fighting anymore not to be back in the office setting. And the door the last guy comes in is not the same door "pen stealer" comes in. That felt kind of weird.
"Predatory Partner"
by Random Axe Entertainment
Genre: Any
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Predatory Partner
by Random Axe Entertainment
When a young man won't sell his shares to his partner, she finds another way to get it.
2,190 views16 reviews29 votes
Smack Talk!
"Woo Hoo! Thank you to all of you who voted for our film. We are really excited as well as surprised by the win. With all the obstacles we faced in this fight we feared it wouldn't be as greatly acceptedd as it turned out to be.
We are very happy that we were able to fight our way up, with your help, from Middleweights to this. We are looking forward to the coming fights and hope we can continue producing quality films for your entertainment. Thanks for the compitition and we hope you all keep bringing it.
Special Thank You's: Audra - for helping on such short notice. Everyone who said we needed to be bumped up a weight class. Jake- For overseeing the whole operation in Justin's absence.
"That's a Wrap".
Random Axe Entertainment "
RandomAxeMedford, OR
Due August 1
01:00 max
