Haha, the first shot of this is funny - love that he's calling the guy over. Very lazy of him. I guess the "crunching" sounds are the monster in the closet? Would have been good to show that somehow - maybe a creepy close up of the closet doors. I am not a fan of the old film effect - why did you even need to use it in this? If you're going to just use screen shots at the end, why not photoshop in a horrible monster attacking him? A smart idea, but could have used it to your advantage more.

I like this a lot and think you guys show a lot of promise! Looking forward to see what you do with a longer form piece! Just didn't think this one was there for the HWs.

I rate this film a C+

It was hard for me to hear the dialog in this one. I enjoyed the old film print look a lot though. I would have slowed down the "burn film" effect a bit more, give the viewer a bit more time to appreciate it. :)

Enjoyed this. The dialogue was a bit hard to understand and I would've liked more "closet" eeriness. Dug the dude in the eye patch!