AvatarJustin
Reviewed on February 15th, 2010

I liked the concept a lot. The footsteps work - too bad it wasn't all one shot and you had to keep cutting back and forth - why do we switch to the cat's view? Is that what happens in Doom? I would have rather seen the cat attack and then the character fall to the ground just like in doom. Could have used some more effects to sell theDoom thing, like a screen overlay just like the game. Liked the idea, just needed to be executed more effectively. I rate this film a C+

AvatarRedhandStudios
Reviewed on February 15th, 2010

This...this right here is why I don't trust cats. I liked the slow motion crossfade events through the final shot, but didn't like the crossfade to her picking up the bigger gun...not entirely sure, to be honest, just found it jarring. Maybe a clean cut away, or a fade out fade in to show time passing.

AvatarLyrynCateNunez
Reviewed on February 15th, 2010

Enjoyed the concept a lot, especially the opening scenes. You kind of lost me in the switching of the guns and cat POV. I also didn't care for how close the gun was to the cat - from a video game standpoint, seems you'd shoot as soon as you see the enemy, not keep approaching, even if you weren't in range at first. Still, this is my fave LW. Enjoyed the creativity.

Avatarwillowskylor
Reviewed on February 15th, 2010

Thanks alot for all your input. Sorry if I confused you guys in any way with the way I chose to do the film. I use Windows Movie Maker for all my videos, so I'm limited to any special effects I can use.

AvatarBalls
Reviewed on February 16th, 2010

Great start, because the additional music fits and makes the film powerful. Nice reaction from the cat, too, there. Wasn't sure anybody would successfully manage to ad more sounds, but you've done it. You're thinking right so if you now will focus more on being clear, it'll be gorgeous.

AvatarZombieGorePrincess
Reviewed on February 16th, 2010

this one is one of my favorites of the LW. I do agree with someone who asked about the switch from first to third person veiw. you could have ( and I'm taking into account a fellow wmm user. lol) had the a quick flash of red when the cat hit, then had the the person with the camera fall over on their back, and put in a title of something like "you died." or "game over." just a suggestion though. :)

Avatarwillowskylor
Reviewed on February 16th, 2010

thank you so much for your encouraging words.

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