Love the music, some great shots here. I don't think it makes too much sense though - I read the description and it was like "okay" - You never really setup the elevator earlier - is it supposed to a big reveal? The stairs themselves are also not setup as a big scary protagonist. Just needs to be more clear. I think you've got the technical stuff down quite well though, so just figure out some better story telling and you're set!

"What?"

Beautiful shots, at least the few initial ones of him walking up the stairs. I get what you were going for, but it didn't come across strong enough.

Good idea, because it's unexpected and original. Also ambitious, meaning, not that easy to get away with. Best way to learn is to take on big challenges.

You really don't need credits for a 30 second film. I have no idea what this was supposed to mean or say. It didn't tell any kind of story at all. Over the top?

Too much walking! I feel like I missed something. This location looks awesome, like CTU headquarters in 24. Some nice shots. Lots of opportunity here!

Um... I'm not exactly sure what this was about. he gets trampled by a group of people?

Other than story, this was really well shot and put together. I wonder if this is part a longer film perhaps?