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"Good ol' Days" by Jack Films - Reviewed on June 22nd, 2018

I love the last shot, and the Dad saying 'I'm 56 years old'...hilarious! Great work!

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"Just keep drawing..." by Micro Monster Movies - Reviewed on June 22nd, 2018

Really deep. The voice was a little hard to hear at first and would have been cool to have some kind of background noise, like birds chirping or a radio playing in the background. A really great short story though. Great work Micro Monster Movies!

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"father's day" by PKR FILMS - Reviewed on June 22nd, 2018

Ha, very strange. Some background noise would be good. Maybe have them meeting each other instead of already sitting, that way the setup works better. Welcome to Film Fights!

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by PKR FILMS

Genre: Haiku

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father's day

by PKR FILMS

keep attention for stuff in the background

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