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AvatarPimJanssen
Reviewed on June 24th, 2014

I really liked the punchline "when things go bump in the night we bump back." Great punchline to base a video on.
What I think was the biggest issue with this video is that it was too dark. Maybe throw in some lighting and make it look like nighttime in post, but still keeping detail. Dark isn't bad, but you don't want the viewer to not see what's going on.
Also the voice-over sounded a little too forced in my opinion. Maybe that was the idea, but it didn't really work for me.
Overall, a good idea and a good entry. Keep on submitting.
You've got great potential.

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