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Avatardeadstrange
Reviewed on March 21st, 2017

Super creepy opening shots. Reminded me of it follows. The audio changes abruptly at the 25-second mark. The sound FXs used were jarring, try to blend them better. I don't really understand what the 2 people were trying to convey. Need more insight on what's happening. Maybe the girl sits and looks at a yearbook of someone that died. Just so we get the context. Great work CTM!

Avatarlg
Reviewed on April 1st, 2017

Nice. I liked the depth of field as she looks over the construction site. I agree with deadstrange's comment on the audio. Could use a little work there. Also, there was no context as to who the girl was or what she was doing there. But left up to me, I'd say she was a ghost of the person buried under the cross. Whatever your intent was, I liked some of those opening shots. Nice job.

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