"This was great, I liked that you had 3 different shots and featured an actual grandparent reading her own haiku. I think you just need to work on the framing of your shots as you chopped the top off peoples heads a lot but apart from that good job. Check out my review on FFTV, and good luck!"
Description: "As the year comes to a close, my grandma recites her haiku about aspirations for the future."
Submitted: December 8th, 2013
New Grandpa
by PeridotFilms
A new grandparent...? Very difficult to use only three, short shots to tell a story! Had a lot of fun making it. Enjoy!
1680 views2 reviews11 votes
by Telefunky Films
Genre: Haiku
Group | Votes |
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Telefunky Films | 16 |
Orange Mountain Films | 12 |
100 Years Alive
by Telefunky Films
As the year comes to a close, my grandma recites her haiku about aspirations for the future.
14,166 views4 reviews16 votes